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Kidnapped the Wrong Sister (English Edition) [Format Kindle]

Marie Kelly
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“I had a phone call from my brother not long after I left you … he told me that you had ripped up the cheque, he had a lot to say about that, along with a few other things, none of which I will bore you with…. Not a smart move Miss Brown”

“And why is that Mr Dranias” she had bit back her eyes angry daggers

“Because you forced my hand….I told you there was no way that I was letting you get your greedy little hooks into my brother.. so welcome to my island”

Diona had looked at him, the confusion on her face so clear

“Wh…what do you mean” she stuttered

By now Nikias Dranias had moved so close to her that there was only about a foot between them, and she could see his dark eyes as they looked down on her with triumph on his face

“I mean Miss Brown that you will be staying here, until you’re due to return back to the UK, when I personally will put you back on the damn plane and out of our lives. My brother, has a very short attentions span Miss Brown, and I’m sure that once you are out of the way, he will quickly find other little playmates with which to fill his day.

Diona had looked at him with shock, her eyes wide with disbelief

“You can’t do that “she cried out

He had smiled back his eyebrow lifting

“I think you will find I already have”

Mistaken for her sister, Diona Brown had been tricked into visiting the island home of the Billionaire Nikias Dranias, who planned on keeping her there as his prisoner to stop his brother from marrying the woman he believed to be no more than a gold digger.

However passion had quickly flared between the two, and now Diona had found that she has to escape to not only save her sister but also herself from the enigmatic and distrustful Greek.

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  • Format : Format Kindle
  • Taille du fichier : 424 KB
  • Nombre de pages de l'édition imprimée : 138 pages
  • Utilisation simultanée de l'appareil : Illimité
  • Vendu par : Amazon Media EU S.à r.l.
  • Langue : Anglais
  • ASIN: B0038KX8S0
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  • Moyenne des commentaires client : 3.0 étoiles sur 5  Voir tous les commentaires (1 commentaire client)
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3.0 étoiles sur 5 Good but ont wow 1 juillet 2014
Par Teter
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As much as i liked reading this book i was disapointed with there beeing too much i love you but i hate you or i love you but i can't trust you.
The kind of book im glad i read but not willing to read over and over again.
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Amazon.com: 3.8 étoiles sur 5  629 commentaires
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3.0 étoiles sur 5 Good idea but... 3 juillet 2012
Par M. Smith - Publié sur Amazon.com
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The idea for this story is beautiful, unique really. And I liked the characters for the most part. Nikias' arrogance was (sort of) easily forgiven in light of how he cared for his brother and was looking out for him. Same goes for Diona. She wanted the best for her sister and did what she thought was right by trying to stop her from marrying a man she hardly knew. My biggest gripe with Diona was how quickly she walked away from Nikias when he wanted to explain or talk. Dismissing him seemed to be far too easy for her to do, which begged the question: Why? Was she hurt before? Had a bad ex-boyfriend experience before?

The lack of editing and constant use of "had" really detracted from the full-on beauty this story could be. Since most stories are written in past tense, there's no need to write "had" unless adding a back story. The headhopping was a bit confusing too. Some POVs seemed to be Diona's but then Nikia's was added. With some editing and tightening up, this story could rise to its full potential and tell a tale that's intriguing and captivating.
40 internautes sur 43 ont trouvé ce commentaire utile 
1.0 étoiles sur 5 No Follow Through 16 août 2012
Par Bnana - Publié sur Amazon.com
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Where do I even start?

The story had so much promise! Independent woman gets kidnapped by domineering man who thinks he's protecting his brother from a gold diggin' ho.

Diona was far from independent. For all her big talk and eyes that shot "angry daggers" she had zero follow through!! It's like she gave up after The Big Man spoke. She did resist sleeping with him during their first week-long encounter, thank God.

Nikias is a douche. Basically he doesn't believe she is who she says she is and that she is some evil heart-devourer. He, however, has the hots for Diona anyway and tries to persuade her to sleep with him (at this point he thinks she's his brother's fiance! Um, huge no-no). Fast forward a week and he discovers he's wrong (but God forbid he admit it and *gasp* apologize!) and escorts her to the airport. Things happen at the airport and, using his very active imagination, he's now convinced she is this master conniver/seductress. Big Man gets very angry and yells some obscene things at her and storms off. Diona flies home heartbroken. Oh yeah! Somehow in the week she was held CAPTIVE, she falls for Nikias (let's all say "Stockholm" together now).

Six months later (yes, 6 months) Diona and Nikias are thrown back together at their sibling's wedding. He still has a complete sh!t opinion of her, but mistresses don't need to be good people, just good in bed.

Nikias never gets better. He has moments, but he's really just being manipulative. He continues to be a closed-minded jerk until the very end when they find their HEA (undeserved).

So Nikias was pretty awful, but that is just the beginning.

The author has serious need of an editor. The verb tense throughout the book is just wrong, wrong, wrong. Everything is written in past perfect tense (i.e. "She had glared at him", "He had moved in closer", "She had looked at him", "He had smiled back"). I had to convert every sentence in my head as I read it. Occasionally the author used the correct verb tense, but really that just made it even more confusing.
Other than the unfortunate verb usage, there were tons of grammatical mistakes (mostly missed commas and apostrophes, but those are important, dammit!) and spelling mistakes.

Also, the story mostly takes place on a private island in Greece and in Glasgow, but you never get an idea of these places. That's disappointing. And what the hell happened during those 6 months they were apart?

Kudos to the author for trying at least. It can't be easy putting your hard work out there. It just needed some more work. The story could be great with an editor and a new male lead.

Note: Story contains explicit sexual situations and graphic language.
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3.0 étoiles sur 5 Good story in desperate search of an editor 9 juillet 2012
Par Amazon Customer - Publié sur Amazon.com
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In terms of the romance, it's nothing new, but there's enough here to entice you to continue reading. It's very much that old formulae of alpha male trying to dominate an assertive female. Yes, the hero was a bit of a wretch, and I did want him to spend a little more time grovelling about being so absurd, but all in all, I'm okay with what I got (mostly because it was a novella instead of a full novel). Mostly, though, I liked that the heroine stuck to her guns and was an assertive, modern woman without being a shrew (as many romances seem to default to).

So why the 3-star rating instead of a stronger one based on the favourable review of the story? This story is in desperate need of an editor, by which I really mean that it does not appear that the author even edited her own story before sending it off. Even disregarding the appalling grammar, sentences were constructed with very little thought toward flow and voice - reading any given passage out loud gets you a very awkward and unnatural result, which has the very natural result of disengaging the reader. (Yes, I understand that one doesn't normally read out loud, but you do sort of "hear" the narrator speaking in your head.)

Had the story been less appealing, I have very little doubt that I would have given this novella only one star. So why the three-star rating? I found the story engaging and the characters likable enough so could not find it in me to give this story any less of a rating than I did, but the simple truth is that those stars were awarded on the basis of storytelling alone.

Oh and for those who care about that sort of thing: the erotic portions of this story were parts I completely skimmed or skipped. I tried to read the first few bits when they came up, but the grammar was just so bad that there's no eroticism to be had here. However, the sex was not excessively gratuitous and felt natural to come up in the story when it did, so in that sense, I'd say the story is far ahead of some of the other erotica I've read on Amazon.
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2.0 étoiles sur 5 Had, had, had, and more had 11 juillet 2012
Par beachbaby - Publié sur Amazon.com
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I enjoyed the premise of the story however the lack of editing prior to publication really detracted from what could've been a really cute tale. There were problems with verb tense usage throughout. A huge overuse of the word "had" really detracted from the storyline.
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1.0 étoiles sur 5 weak ... 21 juillet 2012
Par interesting.. - Publié sur Amazon.com
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I must say that I loved the story line of this book. Ive read the other reviews and all seem to have come to the same conclusion on bad Editting. I for one did not like the weak heroine... I mean really. How can you be called every derrogatory name in the book and not even voice how hurtful it must have been. So weak!! The whole time I was reading this book I kept wondering why on earth I even purchased it. If you want to read about an arrogant jerk as a hero and a weak minded mouse as a heroine this is the book for you. Thoroughly dissapointed...
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