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Moon Wreck: First Contact (Moon Wreck series Book 1) (English Edition) [Format Kindle]

Raymond L. Weil , Frank MacDonald

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This is the first of three short stories that introduces the Slaver Wars series.
All three short stories are also available as a single ebook in Moon Wreck.

Disaster has struck the first Moon landing to be attempted in years. Commander Jason Strong and his fellow lunar explorer Greg Johnson have become stranded with no way home. In desperation, they set off in their lunar rover to check out an anomaly they discovered on their descent. What they find will shake their beliefs and what they know of human history.

Edited by Frank MacDonald 07-24-13

This is a short story of 13,000 words.
 
43 Pages

Short stories in the Moon Wreck series.

Moon Wreck: First Contact
Moon Wreck: Revelations
Moon Wreck: Secrets of Ceres



Books in the Slaver Wars series

Buy all three short stories in Moon Wreck (Book One) 
The Slaver Wars: Alien Contact (Book Two)
Moon Wreck: Fleet Academy (Book Three)
The Slaver Wars: First Strike (Book Four)
The Slaver Wars: Retaliation (Book Five)

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  • Format : Format Kindle
  • Taille du fichier : 606 KB
  • Nombre de pages de l'édition imprimée : 51 pages
  • Editeur : Raymond L. Weil; Édition : 3 (31 octobre 2012)
  • Vendu par : Amazon Media EU S.à r.l.
  • Langue : Anglais
  • ASIN: B009ZOBERU
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  • Classement des meilleures ventes d'Amazon: n°113.889 dans la Boutique Kindle (Voir le Top 100 dans la Boutique Kindle)
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Amazon.com: 4.0 étoiles sur 5  233 commentaires
21 internautes sur 23 ont trouvé ce commentaire utile 
2.0 étoiles sur 5 Back to the drawing board 31 mars 2013
Par mattm9y - Publié sur Amazon.com
Format:Format Kindle|Achat vérifié
I find that I usually disagree with low ratings for a story when there are plenty of 4 and 5 star ratings also. But I guess I'm going to become one of those negative reviewers this time.

Although I found the storyline extremely appealing, the writing was just too sophomoric for me to get through it. Descriptions using the same adjectives repeated over and over, stilted dialog, explaining things that need no explanation, and grade school-like structure frustrated me to the point that I couldn't finish the story. It felt like this was written by an aspiring teenager in his first writing class. Which means that I can't explain all of the 5 start reviews, though.
17 internautes sur 19 ont trouvé ce commentaire utile 
5.0 étoiles sur 5 Another Good Story 3 novembre 2012
Par Boomer - Publié sur Amazon.com
Format:Format Kindle
I would definitely like to see this continued. There are some interesting twists and hints that could be greatly expanded into a wonderful series. This story grabs your interest and flows very well. I enjoy Mr. Weil's style of writing as it is easy to read and moves along fairly quickly.

This is a good short story, which deals with mankind's first return trip to the moon since the 20th century. The story is well set up and the suspense builds as you wonder if the two astronauts are going to survive. Can't say too much more without giving the ending away, but I did enjoy it. I can't wait for the next story!
20 internautes sur 24 ont trouvé ce commentaire utile 
2.0 étoiles sur 5 Disappointing 20 mai 2013
Par Wh Gulledge III - Publié sur Amazon.com
Format:Format Kindle|Achat vérifié
A lot of good reviews. Not sure what is going on here. I like space operas and tried to enjoy the story but the writing was immature and contrived. One of the astronauts seemed to be a whiner. Come on, you don't get to be an astronaut without a type A positive attitude. Did not ring true. Also, in the first 15-20 pages or so we were informed some 5 or 6 times that the astronaut had a wife and son back on earth. Once would be enough! Bought the 3 novellas based on the reviews and wish I had not. Deleted all of them after half way through the first. I hate to give negative reviews, hence the two stars instead of one. I feel ripped off.
15 internautes sur 18 ont trouvé ce commentaire utile 
1.0 étoiles sur 5 Childish writing, don't trust the reviews 19 mai 2013
Par C. Andersen - Publié sur Amazon.com
Format:Format Kindle|Achat vérifié
I really wanted to like this book, but I just couldn't manage it. It reads like something written by a kid in a high school creative writing class, before the teacher marked it up with helpful editorial suggestions. The author adds far more detail than needed (this should be a compactly written short story), the text is littered with typos and grammatical errors, the story background is not convincing, and characters are flat and poorly developed. With the guidance of a good editor, this could have been a neat story. I can't be bothered to read past the half-way point, much less finish it. No idea where all the positive reviews came from (I feel like I was duped into buying it) -- I would suggest trying before buying with this one, or just don't waste your time.
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1.0 étoiles sur 5 The dark side of e-books 16 juin 2013
Par Bernd Meyer - Publié sur Amazon.com
Format:Format Kindle
This story is a vivid example for why e-books' ease of self-publishing is a two-edged sword. Sure, it allows new authors access to readers without being at the whim of the publishing houses; At the same time, it allows "new authors" this access without the benefit of the services provided by traditional publishers (such as editing --- using "your" and "their" instead of "you're" and "they're", as well as "thing" instead of "think", is not something that should happen in a story published for money).

In this case, however, the service that the author (and any potential readers) could have most benefitted from is a simple reality check. The use of language is extremely poor --- poor enough, in fact, that any high school student submitting this story for a creative writing assignment would, I imagine, barely get a passing grade.
Similarly, the story's plot, as well as the characters, are poor and full of holes and. inconsistencies. Which wouldn't be a major issue if anything actually *happened*. But it doesn't. The smallest details are described at excruciating length (and frequently, after such description by the narrator, the characters then confirm everything once more in dialogue) --- yet none of those details are ever of any significance.

All that happens in this story can be summarized in a few sentences: "Two astronauts crash-land on the moon when an unexplained strong electronic signal scrambles their lander's computer system during their descent. The same signal also prevents them from contacting Earth to request help. They set out to locate the source of the signal, and discover a huge, partially exploded space ship, which they then investigate. They discover that, inexplicably, the ship is of human origin; Eventually, they work out how to terminate the transmission and receive help from Earth. Their discovery also prompts a frantic scramble to get experts to the moon to investigate further. The End".

So to sum it up --- don't waste your $0.99 on this story unless you enjoy your reading being frustrating at every level...
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