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Moon Wreck (The Slaver Wars Book 1) (English Edition) [Format Kindle]

Raymond L. Weil , Frank MacDonald
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  • Longueur : 160 pages
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For the first time, all three short stories that introduce the Slaver Wars science fiction series are together. The Slaver Wars has currently sold over 230,000 copies. Read how it all began.

Disaster has struck the first Moon landing to be attempted in years. Commander Jason Strong and his fellow lunar explorer Greg Johnson have become stranded with no way home. In desperation, they set off in their lunar rover to check out an anomaly they discovered on their descent. What they find will shake their beliefs and what they know of human history. It is the beginning of an adventure that will take them far out into the Solar System and to a discovery that is beyond belief.

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  • Format : Format Kindle
  • Taille du fichier : 1415 KB
  • Nombre de pages de l'édition imprimée : 160 pages
  • Editeur : Raymond L. Weil Publications LLC; Édition : 2 (7 février 2014)
  • Vendu par : Amazon Media EU S.à r.l.
  • Langue : Anglais
  • Synthèse vocale : Activée
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  • Composition améliorée: Activé
  • Moyenne des commentaires client : 1.0 étoiles sur 5  Voir tous les commentaires (2 commentaires client)
  • Classement des meilleures ventes d'Amazon: n°73.421 dans la Boutique Kindle (Voir le Top 100 dans la Boutique Kindle)

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1.0 étoiles sur 5 Boring 28 août 2014
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Supposedly written in english, no mastering of the language: gate instead of gait, obliviously instead of obviously, etc. The same sentences are repeated over and over, sometimes bringing the action to full stop.
Characters lack about everything to be realistic; plot poorly imagined (discovered aliens are humans, they fight a threatening lizard species, AI are sexy females, etc).
Look somewhere else.
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1.0 étoiles sur 5 this guy just cant write 15 février 2015
Par suetian
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its a reasonable plot but dear god the writing is poor. the attempts at characterisation are frankly awful. dreadful repetition wooden lifeless characters
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1.0 étoiles sur 5 If you value your time and money, avoid this badly written book 13 janvier 2015
Par Bruce M. - Publié sur Amazon.com
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I went looking for some space opera, and this one landed near the top of the category search. I was hoping to start a good series, so I bought "Moon Wreck" after reading the blurb and skimming the five star reviews. The storyline is familiar, but I expected it to be. "Astronauts find crashed ship on the Moon, it has a working AI, it turns out the ship is from advanced human civilization on the run from an evil empire". I wanted some space opera, and yes it's that.

However, I didn't expect the laughably awful writing, the lack of originality, the complete lack of any technical explanation of anything, the slight sexism that runs through the book, and all the other things that force me write this one-star review. I read the first 75% of the book in detail, then just could not take it anymore and skimmed the last 25%.

The alien Hocklyns are described as "a lizard that walked on two feet with arms and hands. They were a pale green in color with a small crest on the top of their head". Are you kidding me? That's a Gorn from Star Trek! And the Admiral of the Federation Fleet, well he's clearly a copy of Commander Adama from Battlestar Galactica.

Every character is named something from early 70s elementary school classroom. Jason, Greg, Lisa, Elizabeth, Katherine. The alien AIs are named Ariel and Clarissa; perhaps the author watches Disney movies and late 90s Nickelodeon TV shows.

The male characters are never physically described, but the female characters are, as are the female AIs which are called "gorgeous" multiple times. When we meet the second AI, Clarissa is described as "a pretty blonde with deep blue eyes and a friendly face", and Greg notes that "The Federation obviously had a good taste in women." [sic] There are other examples of that kind of casual sexism. Men are pilots, women are nurses. That sort of thing.

The book has several very annoying repetition patterns. We are beaten over the head, page after page, time and time again, about the overprotective sister. I just searched for the word "sister" and skimmed the 35 results, with results like "His sister definitely won't be happy about that", "He knew his sister was relieved", "Jason knew he was going to get an earful from his sister", "He knew his sister was going to be highly upset with him again", "he hated upsetting his sister", "he was just glad his sister didn't know what was happening". We learn that the aliens will arrive in 268 years (12 times that number is used, per the search function). We are told time and again how much Greg misses his wife and infant son, but curiously the author never bothers to give the child a name.

The other 1 star reviews are accurate. The five star reviews? Well, click the reviewer's name and read their other reviews. Some of them seem to give 5 star reviews to everything they've ever read. Keep that in mind. I can accept a difference of opinion, but with the number of five star reviews, the downvoting of the negative reviews, the upvoting of positive reviews, well - perhaps the author has an active fanbase. Perhaps.
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2.0 étoiles sur 5 If you want to be frustrated and have a crappy day, please read. 22 mai 2015
Par Hamza Abdul-Alim - Publié sur Amazon.com
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This book made me very upset. I am very frustrated. This is the first book I have read from this author and It is very upsetting. I love the premise, I really do. Its very interesting. I just have issues with the characters, the authors writing style, the characters and the sister. The sister, even though I never meet her was one of the most annoying characters I have ever read about. As another reviewer put it, it seems like some sort of incestuous relationship. Its REALLY creepy and annoying. For some astronauts, Greg and whats his name( the characters are not memorable at all) are pretty cowardly. How the heck are these guys astronauts and all they think about is getting back to his overly protective sister and wife and baby. Its like come guys, Your wife married you first people to make it back to the moon in a very long time, you discover a alien space ship and all you think about is your kid and your whinny sister. Its upsetting. Now, dont get me wrong. I love my kids and my wife. I would miss them, but so much of the comments were about the sister and wife and kids it was distracting.

2nd major issue. This was almost as annoying as the sister. Ok, so you find this crashed spacecraft right. You find what looks to be human corpses. You find out the ship has been there for over 100 years. did I mention you found HUMAN corpses. WTF. No one freaked out? No one said hey, this is odd. How the HECK did HUMANS get on the moon. Even when they meet the AI, that should have been of the first 5 questions. Its like good grief. No one even baited an eye. That was very upsetting. I was waiting and waiting and waiting for someone to make an off hand comment. NO ONE DID. Its like, did humans originate on this world and some left? Is the last 10,000 years of human history on earth a lie? How the heck did this colony get here. Please something. Nothing. Nada. Zip. Very very upsetting.

Last one. So let me get this straight. All the human worlds were wiped out. This is the LAST human outpost. The last. So the projections from 100 years ago would have put you have 360 years before they reach earth. You all decide to hide and build up a nice pretty city because you miss home. WTF. You all lost 100 years. You could have been colonizing, expanding the tech base of earth. This is about the species people. The human race and you all are off hiding. WTF. You all could have used this time to just build tons of ships. Something. Instead you all just build a city and have the same dated tech and ships. Thats very upsetting.

Ok Im done with my rant. Im givng 2 stars instead of one, only because i love the premise. Im hoping things get better in the rest of the novels.
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3.0 étoiles sur 5 Not horrible 10 mars 2014
Par Joseph C. Barker - Publié sur Amazon.com
Format:Format Kindle|Achat vérifié
Had a few issues with this book. The authors really bad habit of repeating information over and over was one of the biggest. Greg has got to be the biggest coward in the galaxy. Why on earth he's an astronaut is baffling. "Is this safe?" "Are you sure this is safe?" Come on man! Grab your balls! The relationship between Commander Strong and his sister is borderline incestuous. Is she your sister or your wife? The way he is constantly worried about what she thinks about his decisions makes it seem like they are married. Anyway, nice effort, but I probably won't read much more by this author.
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1.0 étoiles sur 5 Character development was the entirety of the book introducing scads of boring people that were not terribly important to the 4 14 décembre 2014
Par B. Amonette - Publié sur Amazon.com
Format:Format Kindle|Achat vérifié
The story was more than a bit contrived, and obviously meant to sucker the unwary into another endless series. Character development was the entirety of the book introducing scads of boring people that were not terribly important to the 4 or 5 pages of actual story that were told. Not recommended.
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5.0 étoiles sur 5 lovers of sci fi will gobble this up! 10 mars 2014
Par Jacqui Toy - Publié sur Amazon.com
Format:Format Kindle|Achat vérifié
This is a really good read, definitely a page turner, and easy to read - doesn't get too bogged down in techno-babble, and keeps your interest all the time.
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