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The Foundlings: Book One of the Urban Fantasy Paranormal Vampire Series, The Foundlings (English Edition) [Format Kindle]

R. M. Garcia , Linda Delcamp Simmons

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Présentation de l'éditeur

Foundlings: vampires created by accidental means.

Throw together Nazi Vampires, Jewish Vampires, and one very special protective Vampire who is 1000 years old; and you have the makings of an explosive and riveting story.

What would you do, if the love of your life, was suddenly kidnapped by Nazi vampires and forced to become one of them?

How would you feel if these same vampires discovered she was Jewish and sentenced her to a permanent death?

Join our hero Donnie as he battles the obstacles of the underworld in a quest for survival against the odds. Will he prevail and save his one true love from eternal damnation?

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If you enjoyed Linian Carmine's The Lost Boys, or Dan Brown's The Da Vinci Code, then you will truly enjoy this story. Filled with wonderful twists and turns it will keep you guessing to the dramatic end.

"This is just one of those stories that draws you in and keeps you reading till the very end."

"Very imaginative and a refreshing twist with vampires can't wait for next book too come out"

"a lot of surprises and some twists in this story, it was not predictable and I love that in a book"

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Also Available By R.M. Garcia

Book One: The Foundlings (FOREVER FREE)
Book Two: The Vampir Manual of the Reich
Book Three: The Beasts Within
Book Four: The Codex of Vampiric Bloodlines
Book Five: The Shrouded Sagas

The Foundlings, urban paranormal vampire series is suitable as a vampire romance series for teens, age 15 and older. Some passages contain swearing.

Eligible for Kindle Matchbook!!

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  • Format : Format Kindle
  • Taille du fichier : 1033 KB
  • Nombre de pages de l'édition imprimée : 465 pages
  • Pagination - ISBN de l'édition imprimée de référence : 1463630514
  • Editeur : R.M. Garcia; Édition : 2 (24 décembre 2013)
  • Vendu par : Amazon Media EU S.à r.l.
  • Langue : Anglais
  • ASIN: B005EOTO72
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Amazon.com: 4.5 étoiles sur 5  44 commentaires
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2.0 étoiles sur 5 Great Story, Abysmal Kindle Formatting, Terrible Editing, Mediocre Writing 13 avril 2014
Par Js Banks - Publié sur Amazon.com
Format:Format Kindle
Ouch!

I have never seen such a promising book pulled down by so many issues. I almost gave up, but I wanted to finish it so I could write a review with full knowledge of the entire book.

The good: The author is highly imaginative, and the plot was varied and interesting. Not being a writer myself, I am amazed at this author’s ability to write a story so complex.

The bad:
Formatting: I’ve never seen such a poorly formatted Kindle book. Hugh swathes of the book looked like they had been copied and pasted out of a text-only email, as there were hard line breaks after a set number of characters, leading to irregular line lengths (one line the full length, the next with one word, for example). Other sections did NOT have line breaks where they were needed – a new section in the story line would be in the same paragraph as the previous section. Normally I don’t feel that a review should be downgraded for small formatting issues, but this was egregious, and constantly interrupted the flow as I had to reread to figure out who was talking or where we were suddenly transported.

The editing: Maybe there was some editing done before this book was released, because there were missing words, or extra words that looked like the leftovers of an edit. But there were also many, many entirely wrong words and misused commas (in fact, sometimes it felt like the author was exactly reversed in comma usage, placing them where they were not needed, but not using them where they were needed). There was also were some cases of just plain bad English (“...me and Abbie will be...” or “...did not try to hide the sarcasms in her voice...”).

The writing: I am not a writer, so I have to say that this author tried. But I also felt like I was reading a second-grade primer sometimes, the language was so pedantic and simplified in some sections. Again, an editor could help. I also found the characters were weak when the plot needed them to be weak, and then suddenly they would be strong again, if that’s what the plot called for. For all the complexities of this plot, I felt a lack of suspense after a while, because I knew that the protagonist would overcome even insurmountable odds due to some previously unrevealed assistance or ability.

Yelling and screaming: I looked up the word “yell” and found that it was used 191 (!) times in this book. Wow, even I was surprised by that number. “Screamed” was used 102 times, so at least we had a bit of variety. Sigh.

Violence: Yes, vampires are often violent (depending on the author). But the violence in the high school fight was disappointing to me (and had no purpose that I could see), and I skimmed over most of the vampire fight scenes because it was all just a bit too much.

Overall, I enjoyed the first quarter of the book the most, but the issues outlined above continued to weigh down the plot, and I just can’t recommend this book to anyone unless the author spends some time editing and polishing the formatting. I hope RM Garcia bothers, because I think this could be a good book with some more work.

(Mrs. Js)
5 internautes sur 6 ont trouvé ce commentaire utile 
5.0 étoiles sur 5 A new take Vampires. 11 décembre 2013
Par rob69 - Publié sur Amazon.com
Format:Format Kindle
This book is very high on my favorites list. A completely new take on the Vampire genre. I couldn't wait for the second book to come out. The author brings the characters to life with such depth, that you care what happens each step of their journeys. I found it extremely difficult to put the book down. Wonderful and tantalizing story. I have to thank the author for following a dream and bringing us this novel. Which I believe will set a new standard in not only Vampire, but horror and adventure books alike. Thanks.
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4.0 étoiles sur 5 Well written and professionally presented. 28 novembre 2013
Par Marj - Publié sur Amazon.com
Format:Format Kindle
This story has more than one personality. Some engaging boy/girl relationship, a bit of erotica coming from the vampire aspect, and some thriller/adventure. There is also a particularly well thought out world.
Readers who like vampires will love it, and general readers will also enjoy it.
Nicely written and professionally presented.
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4.0 étoiles sur 5 Tries a little too hard 10 avril 2014
Par Amazon Customer - Publié sur Amazon.com
Format:Format Kindle|Achat vérifié
I think the bones for a great vampire story are buried in here somewhere. They're just not all put together yet. I think the author has an intriguing idea here -- but it's just taken too far. It's like the author is trying so hard to be different that he/she starts forcing things and the more you force things the harder it is to swallow what's being put in front of you. This is well written, though, with only a handful of typos. I think the one thing that is really holding this back is the cover. I don't think the cover really tells the reader what the series is about -- and that might be hindering the audience.
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4.0 étoiles sur 5 Vampires, A Timeless Tale 3 mai 2014
Par Rose Lynn - Publié sur Amazon.com
Format:Format Kindle|Achat vérifié
I love vampire books. As long as they stay away from sparkly ones, they can divert in all sorts of pleasant ways. I wasn't too sure how well Nazi Vampires would go over or come across in the story but the author did so tastefully and I was really impressed by the story telling overall. This got a 4 star review because it seems some of the language was quite redundant and that the author could have made use of a thesauraus for some of the writing. Other than that it was a great read and quite enjoyable.
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